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Post by Clare on Aug 2, 2011 21:04:10 GMT
I've decided to make a change to the writing workshops in order to attract more interest. [ McGarrett 1.01 ]Description - McGarrett meets Danno... describe his first impression of the man. RULES: - Must be no shorter than 150 words and no longer than 400 words.
- Please add your word count and rating at the beginning of your post.
- Feel free to use any moderate bad language but post a warning if you're using anything stronger.
- And finally... be creative.
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Post by Clare on Aug 3, 2011 20:43:42 GMT
TITLE: First Impressions
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 231
Steve McGarrett spun on the spot to come face to face with a man that obviously didn’t belong on the island. He must be the haole. Chin Ho had warned him that a Detective from the mainland had been assigned his father’s case, and he obviously didn’t fit. He wasn’t a native Hawaiian, that much was evident by his attire. He was in 110 degree weather and wearing a shirt and tie. He wasn’t going to fit in looking like that.
He had his gun trained on him as Danny edged closer, pointing his own weapon at him. If only he knew how easily I could disarm him. He didn’t trust him. He didn’t know him. He didn’t want to. One thing he did know was he wasn’t about to entrust him with finding Victor Hesse. He probably couldn’t catch a cold, nevermind a murderer. No, if he was going to bring his father’s killer to justice, he was going to have to do it himself, despite refusing to run the Governor’s task force.
Seeing Danny Williams was enough to make him change his mind. Sure, the man had fresh eyes, but he’d need more than that to track down the man he himself had spent years chasing. He could use his help, but he was going to be the one calling the shots. Danny would take his orders from him.
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